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by mossgirl19 Jun 14, 2017
Nature, environment /
Intoxicated in flutter
while dancing with winds.
Engrossed on the setting sun,
parting ways with clouds
as they split themself,
letting me float out of the atmosphere.
Candles seem to fade
in my presence,
I blew them out with my wings
so we couldn't see the dinner lit.
Night skies started to form
With the candles blown
Only the moonlight guides
the rhythm of my wings.
Brushing against the soft cheeks
of the night-time winds,
as the smiling stars signal
the journey has just begun.
struggles only come when the gusts
overtake my feathers.
Wanting to see me bald,
I fly easy, with the breeze.
Keeping steady aerodynamically
with the current.
Keeping in flight,
needing my feathers to stay intact
Tis' my everyday,
to stay adrift, overcoming
the varying currents of the air.
Headed towards unknown
possibilities, only knowing that
I am called to fly.
**Written by Mel and Patrick (pmmurphy)**
This captures the moments of flight amazingly well. Almost as though the authors wanted to be such a bird, or have had a journey alike this one... Lovely Murphy and Mel
Such a beautiful write. Honestly, I could see the images unfolding in front of my eye of imagination.
Great work , as always. Added to my favourites:)
by Augustus Black
Sounds like you are an angel flying far away to an unknown destination. The quality of feelings and wordings you have put in this is quite marvelous. I liked your journey throughout this poem.
I'm sorry I don't have a title for nominating poems, otherwise I would have sent this poem forward straight away.
Well done on this.
I agree with Ben - this is a beautiful piece - I can visualise it in my mind. Well done both.
Thank you, Ms. Angela!
by Ben Pickard
Beautifully done, guys. Delicately written with some lovely alliteration too.
Collaborations are rarely easy but this one is seamless.
All the very best,
by Meena Krish