Too Sleepy

by Everlasting   Jun 14, 2017

Every day,
I slept when his light went away,
And every morning,
I awoke with the knocking of his rays
but there were times,
When I still remain in bed
and his warmth
would give me strength

Yet today,
I find me in bed

not wanting
to open up the door
to let him in

Him = sun

Jun 14,2017


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  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    A little chuckle escaped as I reached the end of this read and we
    all feel the same way..not wanting the sun to come catch us and
    pry open our eyes! An enjoyable read!

    • 1 year ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you! I'm glad it made you chuckle

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    I totally can relate to this. There are days I would just like to bury my head under the covers. I don't want to face the day, I don't want to have my world warmed by that lovely sun. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I really enjoyed this :)

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Very clever! A poem that left a smile on my face. Simply beautiful.

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