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by Kitty Cat Lady Dec 5, 2017
Love, romance /
I warned you I'd be trouble
You knew it from the start
I told you not to go there
I said I'd break your heart
I warned you not to change me
Don't lock me in your cage
The pretty things don't mean a thing
That isn't what I crave
I loved you for who you are
I thought you felt the same
But you wanted your own version
Something much more tame
And now look at the mess we've made
The fight for freedom costly
The irony of your ownership
Is that you just went and lost me.
KCL .......that last stanza is a killer...love the connotation in this write , your voice is very distinct and I think alot of people will be able to relate when reading this.
Great Write :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
aw thanks Ben! I really appreciate that :-) x
Miss Kitty, so true! People always think they can change another to their liking. It never works, I have been there, done that. Well done with this.
It never works! Thanks so much Brenda :-) x
Kitty, this is a wonderful write...potent and to the point. No need to read between the lines here! Superb.
Aw thanks Walter, so glad you enjoyed it :-) x
Amazing write! and such a powerful impact in those last few lines- whew! I'm glad to see this is nominated! Well done! :)
Aw, thanks Ren, lovely comments! :-) x
by William Mae
Good write, love doesn’t change people it molds people.
Indeed William, but some will always try! Thanks so much :-) x
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