Bloody Walls

by Heather M Craig   Apr 21, 2005


Standing in the shower,
my tears and water collide
as I reminince the past
and the emotions that construct inside.

I long to subside the feeling
so I press the blade againest my skin.
Bloody kisses taint my porcelain flesh
and the scars show where I've been.

My fists of rage color the walls
as crimson trails flow toward the drain.
Red hand prints paint the enclosure
that forms from my razor blade chain.

The pain has decreased for a moment
as I focus on my burning flesh.
Giving in to society ignorance
where the pain and depression mesh.

After I've dried my eyes
and the blood has been washed away,
I wrap myself in long sleeves, smiling...
when I assure you "I'm okay"

Heather M Craig

--Sorry to give into the cliche. It's not a true idea at the moment, but I wanted to release my anger is all.--No one knows what one feels behind the walls they construct. --

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  • 18 years ago

    by Harlequin[let me put you to sleep]

    that was a good poem, i loved it. i write that way when i'm mad and upset too. plz check out some of my poems
    harley

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    That poem is wonderful. And thank you for commenting on my poem "Far From Happy". All of your poems are wonderful. Stay strong.

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Heather ! Jeez,that is Excellnt ! i loved it,

    i loved this part :
    After I've dried my eyes
    and the blood has been washed away,
    I wrap myself in long sleeves, smiling...
    when I assure you "I'm okay

    we all need to go one with a smile,but am afraid that sometimes we cant be OK !!

    Lovely one.

    take care
    Rua Francis.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    great poem...
    nothing more really to say
    but keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by shenoa

    my god, very intense... i love this poem, so true, so real. its amazing how you can seem to relate to anyone who read this. well, i can relate to you. it seems you have read my mind, and written down how i feel. your an incredable writer... keep it up

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