Very sad poem. And I can relate aswell. I have to say this is one of my favorites by you. It was filled with alot of strong emotions. And the poem flowed really well. You did a great job on it. Keep writing. 5/5
I am astounded. Firstly because some as talented as you could ever doubt yourself and secondly because of the freedom and energy in this poem. I particulary like the way you repeated the mirror line it reflected how you saw yourself throughout the poem. The imagery was out of this earth and at time literally. I thought it was a tad too long but still well written...
[lostlaureate - come find me]
11 years ago
by Tara Kay
Hey, all your poems are awesome, you are so talented, as i read through them i notice your newest ones are better than your first but they are still good and amazing, we all get better at things. anaother great write.