Brother

by Goran Rahim   May 10, 2006


With so much hope,
Finaly i told her my feelings.
she stopped me,
saying not to bother.
After Knowing how much i love her,
still she said,
I will take you as my brother.

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  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Such a nice poem. so short yet no need for any extra words. perfect.

    i voted and gave it a 5! good on you goran

    David

  • 11 years ago

    by Kristina

    Hmm i dont really see this as funny. might just be me, but i dont know. it's a good poem though. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    I'm just commenting to say not only do i like all your poems! (they're the best!) But to say thankyou, for all your comments!

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    This is for ur new poem (how can I) coz my comp is wierd like that! I really liked it! it was so good! n short n think u should do more of them!

  • 11 years ago

    by donna

    Aww this one is sad, and makes me feel a little bad because it reminds me of one of my best male friends telling me how he felt, and I replied the same as the girl did in Your poem.. oops. excellent 5/5 xx