Dearest father

Awww...i like tht rainfall part..for some reason it made me go really sad but with a small smile weird eh?

Not one of my favorites but still fantastic as always!
much love and many kisses,
bex

A heartfelt piece, all the emotion was there. Yet, the flow was a bit choppy and the rhyming was very forced it felt like. And again, spelling errors. Check it out.

LAMP

wow this is very sad.. It breaks my heart to see people who either dont know their father or their father isn't nice to them. Lucky for me I'm very close with my dad we do everything together, but this poem makes me think of ppl who arent that lucky. I am so sorry that this had to happen to you. Bust just think of all the good things in your life, and its his loss for not knowing you. Nicely written. The short stanzas make the lines more direct and to the point very well done chosing it. Thanx for sharing, this with us.

That was sad. I'm fortunate to have grown up with my father, but I really feel for people who don't have that pleasure.
This was a very emotional write, and well written. I will say though, on the third line it should be "you're hurt."
Thanks for sharing.