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by IdTakeABulletForYou Mar 25, 2007
Love, romance /
Tearing through my heart,
Ripping me apart...
Leaving me gasping for air
I breathe in-- nothing's even there.
Blinking twice--no three--four times;
I don't even believe my eyes!
You've taken air right from my lungs
And left me here with nothing else.
Upon first sight my first thought is,
"I'll never have a someone like this."
But still, my eyes are stuck on you
As if they were attached by glue.
I try so hard to pull away
But suddenly I meet your gaze;
My heart beats fast, you walk towards me
(And so, the rest is history...)thanks for reading!
by WiNgS Of StEeL
This is a gr8 poem!!! luvd it gr8ly!!
keep it up
love bree x
Awww, such a beautiful poem!
You showed much of the feeling and
thoughts that goes on. Well described
and penned. God bless 5/5
5/6 one more
by I Love You
I can relate to this poem.
by Anonymous Angel
a nicely written poem, a good flow, and uhm i have nothing more to say ^_^
by The Undoing
I loved how the last line worked in. I thought this was really good, because it went from really sad.
5/5 really nicely written.