by IdTakeABulletForYou   Mar 25, 2007

Tearing through my heart,
Ripping me apart...
Leaving me gasping for air
I breathe in-- nothing's even there.

Blinking twice--no three--four times;
I don't even believe my eyes!
You've taken air right from my lungs
And left me here with nothing else.

Upon first sight my first thought is,
"I'll never have a someone like this."
But still, my eyes are stuck on you
As if they were attached by glue.

I try so hard to pull away
But suddenly I meet your gaze;
My heart beats fast, you walk towards me
(And so, the rest is history...)

thanks for reading!


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  • 11 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a gr8 poem!!! luvd it gr8ly!!
    keep it up
    love bree x

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awww, such a beautiful poem!
    You showed much of the feeling and
    thoughts that goes on. Well described
    and penned. God bless 5/5
    5/6 one more

  • 11 years ago

    by I Love You

    I can relate to this poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    a nicely written poem, a good flow, and uhm i have nothing more to say ^_^
    kisse stephanie

  • 11 years ago

    by The Undoing

    I loved how the last line worked in. I thought this was really good, because it went from really sad.
    5/5 really nicely written.

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