Confessions of a Broken Friendship

by BeautifulxMess   Apr 13, 2007

Confessions she revealed about her past,
But left out why their friendship didn't last.
A boy was the reason she went away,
But she hated her friend more every day.

She told her everything she should know,
And she revealed how she felt so low.
She confessed the truth that were lies,
But she never told why her hilarity dies.

The friendship went on that felt like forever,
But was erased by one lie after another.
She despised how she treated her friend,
But she will never tell why it had to end.

She was hurt, beaten, and astray,
But she didn't seem to care anyway.
"It's not my fault we didn't last."
And her pain shattered like broken glass.

She spoke to her foregoing friend,
And confessed why they had to end.
"I felt horrible about what it was I did,
But your boyfriend wanted what I had to give."

She wanted to slap her in the face,
And tell her to leave without at trace.
Her heart dropped onto the ground,
And told her to never come around.

She told herself it's not her crime,
And she won't have to pay that time.
They would play underneath the covers,
But she was just happy they were over.

*Friend slept with her bestfriend boyfriend. She didn't want her to know, she felt horrible but she never liked her friend in the first place. So, she treated her friend like crap and confessed :) all her lies, and at the end revealed what she did with her boyfriend.*


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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Excellent write. The emotion and concept work hand-in-hand to create a very sad, yet easy-to-relate poem. The flow was flawless, and the concept was brilliant. Not to mention a word usage rarely seen. :) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great poem! 5/5 it had a great flow and it rhymed well, great job hun!
    xx love

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  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

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  • 11 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, well written, the flow was great, and I cannot relate but I felt it...:D Loved it! It was an awesome poem! And a great use of words!