The Wizard

by Startle Me   Jun 5, 2007


Clement man sits as punctual as can be,
Knowing there are watchers all around.
He is known as the great o-loving wizard
With the thoughts of his so profound.

The almighty god he is to the many.
Yet, nonbelievers are there as well.
But he does not care for them at all.
Wizard has his own thoughts to dwell.

For he is the clement, o-loving being,
Celebrant, the man needs to be.
His urges have been getting stronger
Knowing that sex is the only key.

Fantasies of women all around
Doing many different, ugly deeds.
Secretive is the only answer for him
For the man needs to spread his seeds.

Yet, he will continue on as being the adoring
Following other wizards before him had done
He will continue on in becoming celebrant,
Knowing his urges will never get undone.

**Try to guess my hidden meaning in this one. It's very, very subtle.**

*Hint: Why doesn't the wizard do what he wants him to do?**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    I didnt get the hidden meaning at all really...
    you didnt add enough depth into the poem to actually allow people to look into it... (if that makes any sence) also part way through it becomes a little hard to keep reading...

    still well done for trying... it is good but defo not 1 of you best!

    Jacs

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I don't get it sorry.. Maybe its just me but anyway. Word choice is superb as always, I like title of the poem - its really catchy. flow was okay. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I like the hidden meaning, it gave something extra to the poem.
    Strong vocabulary, very colourful.
    I like the story of sorts you have set up. Very nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I didn't finish reading this poem. I got distracted by the colors of the page.

    Honestly, you need to make an impact on the reader quickly before they click off the page. Had I not owed you a comment, I would have bypassed this poem instantly. I don't really know what to say. I feel bad for not being able to read this one... I only hope your next will be better.

    I suggest you start off with a thought-provoking first line... something that will amaze the reader. Something that has 8 or 9 syllables. If you ever edit this poem, message me saying so and I will come back and read it =]

    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I don't think I really grasped the concept behind this poem, it doesn't really state much about the wizard. The flow was good again and the word choice as well, the title is also eye catching. all in all great job 5/5

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