This is what i have become

by Rose not your average   Aug 12, 2007


I do not understand myself.
Do you understand yourself?
I know I should be happy,
But I feel so crappy.

My friends make me feel useless,
And I feel so faithless.
I just sit here with tears running down my face,
I dont belong in this place!

I have all this anger built up inside!
And it is getting untied!
I dont have self-confidence!
I dont have brilliance.

Their tears are stinging my eyes,
I cannot rise!
I am making to many mistakes,
It feels like I am making jailbreaks.

I feel so alone,
I feel like stone.
Nobody really did care,
All they do is stare.

The pain is cutting into me,
And now I am all bloody.
I feel like I am dying,
I feel like I am falling.

I have already failed,
I really was nailed!
And now I am going numb,
And this is what I have become.

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  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    U are the only person i know that can pull off the 1st 2 lines rhyming
    and then the second ones as well very well written 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    I can relate to this poem a lot ~ Just know that things do get better eventually ~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate

    This is really nice. I like it very muchly.
    Its very pretty and well done.
    good job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    I can relate to this one. It was well written and i liked the words that you used. This one flowed better than the last one.. I really liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem, I like the title. Second stanza is great and atmosphere that you created is good.
    The pain is cutting into me,
    And now I am all bloody.
    I feel like I am dying,
    I feel like I am falling.
    ^This is still my favorite stanza. Some lines aren't excellent but rest of this piece deserves 5/5

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