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by the come back Aug 14, 2007
Love, romance /
Can friends be lovers too?
that's my question to you
I'm scared to say it to you
because I don't know if you love me too
Everyday we've been together,
every hour we speak and the laughter
all of that will be surrendered,
when I say I love her
When you hold my arms tight,
my heart beats
when you hold my hands
my mind resists
It is hard to be with you
now I know that I love you
I don't want to lose you
when I say that I love you
by Mr Trio
Simple and right to the point.
Your emotions are clearly displayed.
I hope she realizes what she is missing.
I can SO relate.
message me.i'll tell you dee storie.
I like this poem it's so cute :)It reminds me one of my fav quotes: Somewhere between our talks and laughters, I fell for you. Or something like that.. However, It was great Keep it up.
The rhetorical questions are really engaging. Thats a very good quality in your poem. I loved tha way its strung. 5/5
by Eminent Bard
Nice..,.,heheh..,okay rin basta wag mong ulit ulitin ang mga words na nasa hulihan,.,