The Loneliness

The rhyming was off a lot. I would re-work it. Other than that, it's an okay poem.

Once again I think most people if not all can relate to the emotions in your poetry. I have somebody in my life who I love with all my heart and when were not together I'm thinking about. The sun rises and sets with her and when I close my eyes I see her face. It's much worse to see somebody in your mind that you miss when you know you might now see them again :( Excellent job once again 5/5 GG23

The first part really made nme go "awww". it describes loneliness so well. i think i can relate to this. this form of kinda appeal (repeating "tell me...", questions "why") is so great! the line about promise is so emotional and strong!!
but the ending kinda annoys me.

But if u would just know that these tears

(you can't use "will" or "would" after "if". it should be but if you know that these tears)
Telling how much i missing you

(i guess "tell" would be better.... othercase, "are telling". )

And wanting to be with you once again...

The same thing: i miss <...>and want. You can't use "want" in continious i guess. I think "once" in the last line is useless)

i know it's not the main thing, but it would be just more accurate and gramatically clear this way:

But if u just know that these tears
Are telling how much i miss you
And want to be with you again...

overall, i really enjoyed reading this poem. 4/5

Nicely done, I enjoyed reading this poem. You expressed your emotions well and I think a lot of people can relate. Good work, and thanks for the comment! :)

Loneliness hurts bad, especially after being with someone you still love. Hell is not that bad, unless you've been to heaven first. That's a fact.
How long have you been writing? This was good, even though it could be even better.