Willow Dance (Haiku)

by Krathia   Mar 24, 2008


Early June willow
Spring bows with green whisper-chimes
To summer she sways

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Early June willow"

    Perfectly worded so far, a beautiful first line.

    "Spring bows with green whisper-chimes"

    What vivid images you have given off, this is so unique in its own way.

    "To summer she sways"

    A satisfying ending, you mastered this Krathia 5/5 from me, take care

    ~MaryAnne

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