Only At Night.

by GretaInsideOut   Mar 26, 2008


Only at night do I feel you here.
You drift amongst the wind, through my open window.
The breeze: it sinks, holding your insecurities, your pain and your resistance.

Surrounding the stars, the moonlight wraps and catches in my mind.
I feel you near, only in the night.

The sound of your voice, drifts through me.
When I lay with my head on your chest, you heart was in my ear.
The beat of your existence.

I'd capture the memories; of your kiss, your hurt and your goodbye.
And I'd watch them fall away, but only to feel you close again.

I've felt your grip loosen, I've watched you turn away.
Now I'd love you alone, waiting for another day.

Only at night did I wait for you.
Unsure of how you felt, but afraid of letting go.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    I love this poem :- ) , Especially the ending bit . Your writing is amazing . Thanks for commenting . Take care . XX

  • 15 years ago

    by samantha

    This is a rly good poem, i rly felt sumthan. keep up the goodwork
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...I love the flow of the whole poem, it worked out nicely. keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Pamela G

    It is very nice. Keep it up.

  • Wow, talk about speakin right to my heart! great job!
    and i'm 100% with Alone, i love these lines:

    Only at night did I wait for you.
    Unsure of how you felt, but afraid of letting go.

    i can't wait to read more of your work.