I liked this peice, but I didn't love it. Do not take this personally, please, but I, myself, did not feel any emotion when reading this... it was just... "word word word comma word word word next paragraph word word word...etc." I feel you left out a lot that you shouldn't have thought twice about, maybe, more to this poem, you never brought to the page.? Well, The word flow is excellent, the rhyme scheme, a bit off, but still good. I loved how you repeated, "Lost Sight" in the first two stanzas. Very interesting.
Keep it up sweety, and Thank you for your comment. Take Care <3
Wow! Amazingly written, so creative and emotional piece, you truly expressed your self on remarkable way. Intensively created atmosphere, I was honestly captured with this poem from first line and I think that you overall did fantastic job. Few lines truly impressed me, bravo!