Waiting For the Sun.

by GretaInsideOut   Aug 17, 2007


Waiting for the sun
Is like waiting for a lifetime
This night is so alone
Alone I lay here.

The moon is hiding away
As I stare at my ceiling
I feel like I’m drowning
In a blanket of all my sorrows

I long for the days so warm
When I felt like I was free
Now as I lay
I wish I could feel.

I look around to find but darkness
Like the corners of my soul
Trashed and torn I crumble here
Never to see the sun.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That one went deep, sometimes everyone feels that way. but nevertheless, good write... (b'.')b

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem reflects alot of meaning behind it. sometimes we wait for all the lifetime of our loved one but when they come, they dont found us.

    the mystry of love is so hard sometimes to understand. only a person who has true love inside can expaling the things you wrote here. welldone

  • 12 years ago

    by Hebe

    A very deep poem.
    Your sadness is really clear.
    It was beautiful to read.
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by An Act Of Depression

    Whoah
    This poem is really amazing!
    So much depth.Sadness.

    "I look around to find but darkness
    Like the corners of my soul
    Trashed and torn I crumble here
    Never to see the sun"

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwww. it touched me the deepest part of love. the part where i have saved some old lost love memories. and after reading this poem my those inside feelings awakep and flew in the shape of my tears. and i cried after reading your poem. the first stanza realy was nice. you have great great talent. i love you all poems.
    i will give 5 not becasue you are my freind. but beacause you deserve it.
    5/5