Now That You're Gone

by The Queen   Apr 9, 2008


Eyes filled with tears, scanned the grayish sky.
Whispered your name, along with a great sigh.
Heavenly castle, in the air mislead me.
I am lost. Lost in my [own] fantasy.

A love that has turned to pain [I cried.]
You made me feel everything. So Much.
I Love You. -For all that you are and aren't.
But why, why did you choose to let go?

What else is life, but being NEAR you.
Since you departed, the air that I breathe
-No longer holds time. [Killing me slowly]
Now that you're gone. Alone naked I am.

Spent memories, trying desperately.
It's all in my head, can be erased, [I know].
The way I feel, think and act Today,
Will I endure it forever? Maybe [Not].

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  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    Wonderfully written. The flow, emotion and image was all there. I could imagine someone reading it, like classical poetry even, with choppy words and a crowd erupting with satisfied clapping. Well done. There's nothing I could say about making this better. 5/5 No critic. Absolutely beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow its like a classic figure.. so alive.. and so meaningfull.. ur so great about being a writtet!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow its like a classic figure.. so alive.. and so meaningfull.. ur so great about being a writtet!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow its like a classic figure.. so alive.. and so meaningfull.. ur so great about being a writtet!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was beautiful and very deep writing. the first stanza reallly held the most meaning. a great way to start off a poem. i love yer writing style it's unique. you did a wonderful job with this one. keep up the nice work! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

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