The tree and me

by Finalgravedigger   Apr 22, 2008


The tree and me ( version 2 )

Red blood leaves encircle me
All of them float down form this decaying tree,
Looking up I see its horrid pain
It's like as though its gone miserably insane
with each leaf a tear, it cries invain.

It's old dark moldy bark
is absolutely covered in scorch marks
branches are weak and shriveled
but its appearance is trivial.

Inside it grows moldy and dry
roots that support life are about to die
the land is barren all around
and the hopeful sun is no where to be found.

It's sad to see the reflection of my sould
all broken and unwhole
but at least I wont perish alone
it's good to know that someone else moans.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    This was such a good poem. The tree has such great significance to life and everything around it. This was a good poem. I truly enjoyed it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex

    I love this one..i really enjoyed it, it was dark and the details of the poem were amazing...

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Again there is something different about your style can't put my finger on, but I am really impressed 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
    word choice and flawless flow

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    This one reminds me of my poem Mirror, Mirror. Which I have to think is one of my best works. So I am basically telling you that this is a great piece of work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is another beautiful write from you.. the imagery.. the word choice.. wonderful..

    'It's sad to see the reflection of my sould
    all broken and unwhole
    but at least I wont perish alone
    it's good to know that someone else moans. '

    ^^ this is really impressive...

    great write..

    keep writing..

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