Star Babies

Breattaking piece, your wording really brought this alive for me, and you have talent beyond words. Wish I could say more but there's nothing else but wow! Amazing write, really, this is just great! 5/5 from me..

Wow, beautiful poem. a really good word choice, i thought, because it was complex, but not overly wordy. It had a great flow with no flaws. Youre obviously talented. keep writing!! 5/5

Caitlin

-Particles of Nox,
reside upon reserved iniquity,
Banished from textured shores,
To serve as stellar light.-

^Wow Mel this is beautiful. Your choice of words is fantastic because it helped you to create this captivating atmosphere, and simply you impressed me with clear power of your words through whole stanza.

-From birth they came,
to death they begun.-

^This left me literally speechless because there is so much simplicity within this deep thought, you added so much effective tone to the rhythm of poem with this part, simple yet meaningful lines, I admire the way you said this.

-Helpless to oppose womb raiders,
They fought yet lost the fight.
kingdom orbit was destiny,
To ablaze ebony skies. -

^Fascinating ending stanza. I honestly don't know what to say, except that this is wonderful, it posses so much beauty, this poem goes into my favorites, you should be proud for writing it.

I love your choice of words and your astronomical depth in this well written poem with a flawless free flow. This poem is an outstanding masterpiece which any master poet would be envious of. I am speechless.

Lovely poem. Great style of writing. Enjoyed it!