Always Women To Me

by Independence Forever   Jun 2, 2008


I offer you a drink so you take the whole bottle
I allow you a punch so you choose to throttle

I try to run but you force me to crawl
you stab me with sarcasm's great thrall

I smile at you but you scold me like a child
I joke around and you act hot but mild

let's just say it's hard to get things past you
but you always accept the hardships I go through

I act like an idiot and you just smile
it makes an effect that lasts a while

you calmly correct my character flaws
you firmly slash with your sharp claws

you always think of me and listen to my words
you're willing to allow me to take seconds and thirds

you sharply rebuke but you calmly soothe
you always know when I'm out of the groove

you bring out the best and worst I can be
and you're always loving women to me

::dedicated to Samantha, Gisella, Katie Lizotte, Missy, and Hailey Deyoung::

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  • 14 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Hey david its sam i just read this for the first time today thanx so much for how you feel iam im glad you think im such a great friend

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a great parody of Billy Joel's always a woman to me

    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet. lol.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    U sound like sucker to me dave j/k good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    hmm... not sure how to take this one. I dont think i scold you like a child?
    thanks for always making us smile
    5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23