To love is to die

I love this poem although the words were tricky. Lol. But I seriously love how you wrote this. Very literal and well thought out. Full of emotions and great lenth. =)

Oh and thank u for reading my poetry and enjoying it.

I would really love love it if you could read the poem called the quite nerd.

Thank you. I also rated.

I would firstly like to comment on the little comment you left at the beginning

( This was minute poetry and not one of my best but i hope yall enjoy ^^.)

You shouldn't have it there cos this poem is brilliant!!!! It is such a stunning poem, your words are so haunting yet truthful and I guess that the truth is generally what people try avoid.

Wondering aimlessly with colorless eyes
Not able to blink or attempt a cry
Stuck in a gaze of a soulless dark well
Staring at emotions,only wishing to dwell.------------- wow is pretty much all i can say, they was an amazingly powerful and effective way to start your poem. a good start is always vital for a good poem!!!!!!!

Pupils are desertly dry, veins are tense
Mouth agape with torment so ignorantly immense
Feelings are shut down, incapable of moral function
A jagged rigid mind living for inconstant dysfunction.-------------- your words were so graphic here and was makes an outstanding writer is when one can write graphically and allow the reader to see what they are saying rather than just read it.

Trapped and controlled by thorny dead vines
Slowly it twist as the body and pain combine
Embracing the ties of loves deadly rope
Burning while smiling in a hearts false hope.------ love is all about pain, love is basically a set up for getting hurt although some people manage to find true love its not very often that it actually happens in todays society. love is deadly and has deadly and painful consequences sometimes. it always builds you up just to push you back down.

Loves parasitic ways are quite mutual in illusions
False happiness in exchange for death is the conclusion
Always being given a name to forever shine so bright,
As broken hearts and souls melt in the scorching light.--- like your beginning this ending was just perfect. it was so strong and powerful. i absolutely loved it. well done on another amazing job

I specially like the "Loves parasitic way" line. Nice peice.

I really, really, like this. I see how it's somewhat similar to mine, but I like yours more. =)

O my gosh what a beautiful poem