No more tears to cry...

Wow this is really has a deep emotions

Omg that was just amazing....it brought tears to my eyes actually. It was short but very beautiful so awesome job =D But this is so true...I mean like when you cry...and keep on cryong someday itll feel like you cant cry anymore, this shows it really well. Strong emotion ahaha. People are right but who cares everyones poems has flaws but blah!! Everyones poems are amazing like this because it is just amazing how its written!! SHORT AND FULL OF EMOTION

=D

CourtneyxHolland

Oh ya just thank you so much for the comments on my poems =D they ment so much to me :]

Much Loves for Chu

<3

5/5

Short, but very well written, its a good read, but i think it shouldve been posted in your quotes, but either way, i liked it.

Your a very talented writer ! =D
4/5?
Dollface.

Have you ever been cried
but theres no tears to come out
^^ Apostrophe in the word THERES was missing and a question mark after the word OUT.

It was short and as a poem it could have been better if it was longer. Quotes, it will do..Keep writing..

Have you ever cried
but there are no tears to come out

There are times you want to cry
but you need to hide it

And you just don't realize these tears
you keep on hiding inside your heart

That causes pain and it turns
into your sensitive heart and soul

This poem speaks to my heart and soul, sweet lig

It would just work better for me if the word been was not in the first line
And earned was not in the sixth line