Take Me home(sijo)
by Crystal Rose Blooming Aug 8, 2008
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Majestic mountains, winding creeks, this is what my heart seeks |
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15 years ago
by Sylvia
Perfect images. How I wish I was there.
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15 years ago
by Lonely Rider
Beautifully picturised... wonderful imagery... deers and birds and wild rivers.. i love that...
I have never heard of this form...
thanks for introducing it... it would have been better if you had mentioned as a note the syllable count if there is any... or how it is written.. :)
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15 years ago
Hey Crystal this was absolutely beautiful
you paint a vivid and lovely picture of where your heart wants to be.Very well written
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15 years ago
by keithnwv
Hey Crystal, Ive never been away but those who have always seem to long to come home. Were here waiting for ya!!!!!!! :)
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15 years ago
Wow, great word choice and the scenery you have placed in my mind is amazing! Great work, so much beauty in such a small amount of words. Keep writing, always and forever.....
