My Love (Rondelet)

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Dec 26, 2008


Karan my love
Dance with me in loves sweet debut
Karan my love
Send your love on wings of a dove
White is the rose I give to you
vow of love pure, simple and true
Karan my love

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Rondelet
line 1 - 4 syllables - A (the same as line 3 and 7)
line 2 - 8 syllables - b
line 3 - 4 syllables - A
line 4 - 8 syllables - a
line 5 - 8 syllables - b
line 6 - 8 syllables - b
line 7 - 4 syllables - A

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  • 11 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is such a beautiful poem, Crystal. :) Karan's a lucky man. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Krista

    This was beautiful. The emotions were absolutley blissful. It made me smile. You do love him a lot.
    Take care,
    krista

  • 11 years ago

    by Krista

    This was beautiful. The emotions were absolutley blissful. It made me smile. You do love him a lot.
    Take care,
    krista

  • 11 years ago

    by Cara

    This is so beautiful. It really does show your love for Karan perfectly. You wrote it in a complicated form, but still made it shine.
    Im sure Karan absolutely loved it.
    Such a beautiful poem.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Faithless

    The poem was such a delighful to read...so simple yet beautiful...Karan must be a lucky guy to have u;)