Strength and Love

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Dec 19, 2008


Redwood tree
Standing strong and so tall
Handsome and regal weathers the storm

Rivers run
Swiftly changing the earth
Confident in his work and his worth

Winds blow strong
Clearing clouds from blue skies
Just as he chases tears from my eyes

Rose Gardens
Their fragrance fill the air
Essence of his love is everywhere
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*Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan Naidu my love*

This form consists of 4 verses 3 line in each verse. The syllable count for each stanza is 3,6,9. In this style of poem the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described..

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    I think the whole poem is written very well. Nicely constructed lines with emotion. Great to read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful description of love! It just had me smiling because I know each word came straight from your heart. Karan did an excellent job on creating this form and you did a wonderful job of bringing it to life.

    Well done!
    *5/5* :]

  • 11 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Parallelogram de Crystalline eh?
    i think i might giv it a go, the example you leav us here is phenomenal. it has flow it has elegance, and with such a great feel from the outset. ill definatly read this more than 1nce. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This was so sweet Crystal. I am happy to see that you used the poetry form that Karan created for you. It is so romantic.

    "Rose Gardens
    Their fragrance fill the air
    Essence of his love is everywhere"
    These were my favorite lines, they were so beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Bravo. This is a wonderful poem and Karan did a good job on creating this form. Excellent write. 5/5