Revenge(Rictameter)

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Oct 9, 2008


Revenge
Malignant force
Destined to destroy life
Attaches it's self to your core
Capable of invading every cell
Forgiveness and light is the only cure
Breathe deep the essence of pure love
Melt the glacial heart
Eradicate
Revenge

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Revenge...is a very human emotion..when someone hurts your child ore someone else you hold dear...but often it backfires on you. Karma has his way ofh dealing with people who go astray...far better then taking matters into your own hand;)
    A very good write!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Well written and conveys revenge as it is. Excellent job on this form.

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that was very powerful and filled with emotion. You really gave us a great message..that its much better to forgive.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Crystal you did an excellent job on this one its a difficult form, but the way you wrote it was first class.
    Your choice of subject matter well chosen it had a good bit of emotion in it, and i liked the way you turned negative to possitive . Well done

    Grant

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