Carpet of Life ( Double Senryu )
by Ingrid Dec 3, 2008
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15 years ago
by Lonely Rider
This is so beautiful ... such an optimistic view of life ...
Looking back one day
your carpet will be perfect
each thread in it's place
^^it leaves you with a feel-good feeling :) beeming with positive attitude...
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15 years ago
Well, A wise man once told me "A stupid question is a question unasked", so my question is what does you poem mean? It really looks impressive, however I am sure it would be even more impressive to me if I understood what it refers to :))... Many Thanks
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15 years ago
by Faithless
Ingrid im speechless with your beautiful metaphor...ur little words speaks a thousand words
great job
5/5 from me -
15 years ago
by Sarah
Though it's very short ... your words had a long meaning that made me want some more... Great poem 5/5
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15 years ago
by Sylvia
Very nice. Excellent message with few words. 5/5
