Awww. That's beautiful. :D I love Mr. Darcy. <3<3<3 ^_^ He's kick ass.
The only thing I have to say is work on punctuation a little more. Only small mistakes, other than that I loved it. The rhyming was brilliant and I love how you made it a royalty thing. It made it unique seeing how you could have done the simple thing and went with modern times and using actual names. But that is very cool. Loved it. Five out of five. :]
Crystal, thank you so much for this wonderful dedication. While I was reading it I was thinking, hey this dude is one hell of a dad to have Crystal writing about him, I wonder if she'll say who it is...well, as I said, I'm speechless.
I have just returned from the hospital with him. Everyone there is so proud of him as he is doing so very well. They have said that he can reduce the nights where he has to have intraveinous feed. He has had a growth spurt and as getting stronger by the day.
So you can imaging how I reacted when I read this, It sent shivers through me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.