Aweh. This is really great; and I read the comment from the person named Jack, and I'm guessing that's the person this was about. It's really sweet and I find it so easy to relate to it. Great job. I would also appreciate it if you would comment/rate my newest piece called "I solemnly swear." Thank you.
10 years ago
So much passion and emotion was put into this, that's why it was such an enjoyable piece. 5/5. Em x
I love this one with a passion. it's so amazing. the words you use to describe all of the emotion is perfect. i understand it all really clearly. keep it up!!!! comment on any of mine please because i would love to hear your thoughts on mine.
Wow i really like poem.I can feel the emotions running through it from the start to the finish.Well sometimes it hurt us deep to tell the person whom we love most that we "no longer feel for them" due to certain reason. I can relate to this poem of ur as i too have gone thru the same thing as u.I think the poem ends beautifully as eventhough the both of u have gone separate ways but he still roams around ur heart.