Green dreams, Red sacrifice

by Dark Secrets   Dec 24, 2008


D... dr..e...dr..ea..m
First words of a dream
Crept from the mouth of one dear child
Bouncing off the tip of his tongue
Past the half plenary teeth
To become a mere particle of air
Along it was carried to climb the highest top
To seek what was foretold
The radar in it's eyes shot past the darkness
To catch lingering shadows of light
Now suicide was the dreams' thought
It threw itself to smash apart
Only to fly past as a million
To the souls who held hope and love
Continuing the journey they seek
The brightest star shone high above their heads
and killed the rain storms away
They soon were driven to the dream's thought
and reached the highest peak
Off the mountain one by one
Onto the clashing sea and rocks
To smash the overgrown dream again
and let it pass along
To the souls that glow in the deepest night
To this day they grow in augment
And the mountain turns bloodier still
But the redness never shows
For the green of the dreams
Is grater than the red
Count one million trees of dreams to start
and a drop of blood for each
You'll find the first beginning drop
Was the drop that planted the tree!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Very powerful and you did an excellent job at describing here. Flows well and over all its an amazing write. keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Gness

    I loved this poem the name fits well with the big stanza its very symbolic and descriptive.
    Nature played a big part in this too. Great job

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    A very deep and meaningful write. Filled of words of wisdom, to never lose hope no matter what, strive for the best despite of the hindrance along the way. Very inspiring i should say although there was a lil bit of sadness and negativity at the end.

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,what an amazing piece.It was really wonderful ,amazing and so touching.

    You are a wonderful human and an excellent poet.Well done.

    Give you my vote.5\5...