Open Road

Oo Sasha..very good work on this one !
I really love it you so knew how to put the words together to fit one big amazing piece of poetry =)
I certainly have no criticism for this piece..it's just beautiful the way it is..
Although there's this small thingy you missed:
"I'll be waiting there my friend"
I think you should put a punctuation here, a comma or a dash so it'd be like this:
"I'll be waiting there,my friend"

It's just a suggestion because it kinda confused me without the comma.
one more small thing..try to use more creative rhyming words..the ones you used-though not all-are kinda cliche
Other than that..your piece is absolutely flawless.

Write on
Missed you girl <33

An okay piece, in my opinion. I liked the structure, words, and rhymes, and it even had power, to a degree, but I felt there could've been more. In my opinion, you first stanza was the best, and the piece sort of lost power after that.

Brad

Sasha your poems are so eloquent and amazing. This one is no different, You have so much talent, your flow was so perfect and wording was really good.

Wow :] This was such a feel good poem.. I really enjoyed reading it.

Needing no one independent yet able
Shining, confident, proud and stable
^^ Great lines, they are filled with strength.

Every road leads somewhere
^^ So true.. every road does lead somewhere.. whether its good or bad.

Accomplishments calm all fears
^^ i loved this line.. it was so cleverly written. Its very true.. i really loved it, originality :]

Awesome poem! This one was totally fantastic. The flow and rhyme was very good also.
5/5

Wow,it was really beautiful and so nice...

welldone sasha.May Allah bless you...
5\5...