I Dont Know Who I Am

by Saving Grace   Jan 11, 2009


This may sound strange,
Probably even stupid, i know.
But i really dont know who i am,
Where the hell did i go!?

I dont understand myself,
I feel like im the only one,
I want to know who i am,
But i duno anymore, with everything thats been done.

I grow further away from knowing,
Each torturing day i face,
I dont know where to look anymore,
I want to know why im in this F**king place!

I feel like im someone else,
I dont ever feel like i belong,
Im confused and all over the place,
Why does everything feel so wrong!?

Everyday i face with a gleaming smile,
And big blue shining eyes,
This just doesnt feel real,
It just feels like fake little lies.

It hurts so, so much,
My heart is about to break,
I need to find myself,
Because its becoming more then i can take,

Ive been through too much, im over it now,
I feel as though im going to break,
Im looking but i dont see,
And i feel like im being so fake,

I dont remember where i lost myself,
And its been so long, i cant remember when it began,
But please dont ask me,
Because i dont know who i am.

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  • 16 years ago

    by 777

    I love it! its been a while sens i read a good poem!! plus i no that feels.

    <3
    JAsman

  • 16 years ago

    by CareBear

    So So So, Very good :)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    I feel like im someone else,
    I dont ever feel like i belong,
    Im confused and all over the place,
    Why does everything feel so wrong!?

    that was my fav stanza!
    i felt like this but eventually found who i was when i met my bf :)....
    well written
    xo 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Lovvvved the ending, the tittle caught my eye because I have a similer poem, I thought -like mine- it was going to be about the part in your life where you don't know who you are. I was surprised to see that it was about the numbness we feel sometime in our life where it's like we are there, but not at the same time.
    Good job, this is how we're supposed to do it, find an attracting tittle and surprise everyone with the inside...

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Great poem, excellent question, at one point or another we all ask the same question, you wrote this poem very very well with an addictive ryme and choice of words.

    5/5

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