Help Me

by Saving Grace   Nov 3, 2009


Ive done the best i possible can,
To try and make you understand.
But no-one seems to really see,
That a certain something, is destroying me.

Its something that engulfs your life,
Makes you want to pick up a knife.
Its something that takes away your faith,
And makes you feel so unsafe.

Im not sure how much more i can take,
Before i crumble, and before i break.
I managed to fight it by myself,
With a smile i pretended to be somebody else.
But its at the stage im losing hope,
Im giving up, i cant seem to cope.

This thing is painfully ruining me,
Controlling my life happily.
Im not living - Im surviving,
And inside im slowly dying.

But you all listen, but you dont hear,
And you may watch, but you dont see,
So im going to make it very clear....
I HAVE DEPRESSION AND ITS KILLING ME.

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  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow, i loved this! I can relate, depression is hard to go through. Great poem, well written. great job.
    pm me if you ever wnt to chat

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    This was a very strong poem... The flow was great & your wording was done quite well it was a little of beat in a few places but if red in a certain flow it didnt show too much.
    I really enjoyed it.

    wishing you the best hun xx

  • 14 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Wow, that was sad hon. good job though. 5/5 always. best writer. ox love you. stay strong.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    But you all listen, but you dont hear,
    And you may watch, but you dont see,
    So im going to make it very clear....
    I HAVE DEPRESSION AND ITS KILLING ME.

    This is the best part in the whole poem the flow was way perfect and it gets a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Wow!! i didn't know you were going through this love :( it's a great poem, one of your best i'd say, but so sad to read coz i care about you so much. i love the flow and great word choice, i hope you can get better and want to do it for yourself, because you are a great girl and i want you to heal :) 5/5 because it's so relatable and so well written
    take care xxxx

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