The World Today

Well it's the first time i've came upon a poem like this. We can all relates to it. Great idea and well done.5/5, kel.

Ok when i first came apon this honestly i was like what the hell XD, looking over it and down it again on about the fifth time, i noticed that you used every single letter of the alphabet in alphabetical order, i was like woah, anyway im still going to try to critique a bit, and break down the defintions, by the way i got drawn to this poem because this is a very underrated topic, this world is a piece of you know what now with murderers and rapists and child molestors, it was suppose to be that only the devil could exist in the seven levels of now im sure there are plenty of people that exist in those and maybe a couple of their own.
Verse 1:not sure,
Verse 2:Lies of all magnitude will follow you
Verse 3:The deteoration of the world we live in brought on apon us by ourselves,
Verse 4:The few that have gotton away
Verse 5:not sure, the world or our world being limp after exposure to a evil or dark being or happening
Verse 6:This one has to much contrast, Despite your unique writing form for this poem, Contrast within a poem is hard to understand but then within a verse is just uncomprehendable the rest of the poem is coming together.
Verse 7: how this one actually has something to say to me.. i see rape and murder in this one.. powerful
Through the last parts of this i see lousy politcians and greey CEOs, overall not to much to critique considering theres 26 words, and theres nothing that i can change,
just out of the rareness of this poem i give you a 5, the meaning helps it also

True but have you found hope?

How very clever :]
A totally unique poem. You really did a great job of describing the word at the moment, in a very original way. You managed to use all the letters, not an east task.
5/5

WOW. All way from A to Z... Quite many words to describe our planet and its inhabitants. Unique writing. I enjoy.

World today is not a pinkish castle built on clouds.