Golden Dome

This is extremley inspiring ...and FLOWLESS..he rhythm was amazing.

the word choice was just perfect,,and the imagination u have let crawl around was,,,breath taking...

ut opening lines caught me deep inside

Land of the golden dome
Decorated in crimson hue
>>> what a poet are u ?..this is so poetic..amazing

Artworks made up of flesh and bones
Patterns resembling love ones you knew
>>how harsh and how brilliant

Looking up to the chalky sky
Clouds filled with raining missiles
>>omg I can even image it...this was perfect

Showering down before the innocent's eyes
Rendering thousands to live in exile
>>>>showering down?? I bow for ur poem.

Tidal waves of bodies coalesce in mass volumes
As cross and crescent domes were coated in black
>> found these lines the strongest through this particular stanza..

Kingdom of prophecy, commandments and trinity
Faiths flourish throughout the century
>>> woaaaaaahhh u blew ma head offf...over here...what a creative stanza u versed to end ur poem

>> ur a poet with all means...
never stop writing
it suits u a LOT

Such a touching read Azzza and the imagery you created so very heart wrenching.

Each and every stanza really makes one think of your ending line.

You have penned a piece that will touch many!

Your work is impressive. Imagery and wording was spot on. This was so vivid I could feel the pain and the devastation of the innocent. Good job

Reading this poem, there's nothing left to say. Your words just blow me off my feet. I love it . Very well done, kel.

"Land of the golden dome
Decorated in crimson hue
Artworks made up of flesh and bones
Patterns resembling love ones you knew"

^^What a beautiful opening..so much melancholy yet nevertheless so elegantly written.

"Looking up to the chalky sky
Clouds filled with raining missiles
Showering down before the innocent's eyes
Rendering thousands to live in exile"

^^I don't think you need "the" in the third line, it seems to flow better without for me.

"Capsules that soar in sparkles
Enthralls children with their flying abilities
Mistaking them for wingless glowing angels
Not knowing in seconds, there will be casualties"

^^One of the strongest stanzas in the poem, the emotion and depth and meaning here is incredible, wonderfully penned.

"As they kissed the ground, planting mushrooms
The earth is left sunken, engraving myriad cracks
Tidal waves of bodies coalesce in mass volumes
As cross and crescent domes were coated in black"

^^I'm finding this piece to become stronger and stronger throughout, I don't want it to end.

"Kingdom of prophecy, commandments and trinity
Faiths flourish throughout the century
Revelations seem to provide no remedy
Oh God, when will I ever see tranquility? "

^^...I don't even know what to say here, except that I'm literally blown away..this is a beautiful, moving and thought provoking write.

The imagery you create throughout this piece is stunning..creates such striking visuals in the reader's mind, while the content and wording are just as beautifully written..

Fantastic write.