Once Again

by Aaron Martin   Apr 16, 2009


Once Again it happened
I was shot out of the sky
This time for no real reason
I felt my heart die

Once again it happened
My heart was torn from my chest
Now i dont know what to do
I feel like I am dead to the rest

Once again it happened
I'm getting really tired of this crap
But i guess its inevitable
Maybe.. I'll take an endless nap

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  • 9 years ago

    by victoria

    You can just feel the twisted emotion in this. The everyday stress of life.
    once again great job.=]

    victoria

  • Awww. very nice poem. But look to the bright side of things and maybe it wasn't ment to be. If they don't love you whats the point to be with them any way. good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Holy wow....
    really good job...
    no...
    great job...
    amazing<3

  • 10 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    **Im getting tired of this crap.

    This flows better 4 me thort id let you know. lol

    *Hunny*

  • 10 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Once Again it happened
    I was shot out of the sky
    This time for no real reason
    I felt my heart die

    ^^Rhyming was good. I stuttered when i red these lines 4 sum reason.. maybe it was the flow?

    Once again it happened
    My heart was torn from my chest
    Now i dont know what to do
    I feel like I am dead to the rest

    ^^great rhyming & flow. it fitted perfect.

    Once again it happened
    I'm getting really tired of this crap
    But i guess its inevitable
    Maybe.. I'll take an endless nap

    ^^This expressed alot in these short lines, great flow & rhymes.

    Well done. Keep it up!
    *Hunny*

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