Emptiness

by Dreamofolwin   Apr 24, 2009


Words just cant
Seem to express
This feeling of
My emptiness..
No self worth
No living with pride
Just a vacantness
Thats deep inside

Want to banish it
Just for a while
Bask in the sunshine
Of a heart that smiles
But just cant find
The power within
To expel this darkness
That I am in

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  • 14 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Very good.. you hav a rhymin scheme tht works very well.. great poem.. it just pulls you in adn want to read mroe...keep up the great work.. ^-^

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The feelings of dispair can be felt in these words you have expressed in this write. May you once again find peace and joy deep within your heart. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

    sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Such a powerful write. Depression can cause such a darkness and at times it seems as if you will never be able to pull yourself through it and see light again. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a dark piece you have penned here. The pain and dispair can be felt in your words. I have enjoyed reading your work.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Storm

    Wow, so deep. *hug* may things work out for you. 5/5

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