Emptiness

Very good.. you hav a rhymin scheme tht works very well.. great poem.. it just pulls you in adn want to read mroe...keep up the great work.. ^-^

The feelings of dispair can be felt in these words you have expressed in this write. May you once again find peace and joy deep within your heart. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

sadaddy

Such a powerful write. Depression can cause such a darkness and at times it seems as if you will never be able to pull yourself through it and see light again. Well done.

What a dark piece you have penned here. The pain and dispair can be felt in your words. I have enjoyed reading your work.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Wow, so deep. *hug* may things work out for you. 5/5