You Crossed The Line

by Saving Grace   Apr 29, 2009


I thought that you loved me
I thought that you cared,
I thought that i could trust you,
With the secrets that we shared.

I gave you everything i had,
I gave you my delicate heart,
I trusted you not to break it,
But you went and tore it apart.

You made me so happy,
The best id felt in a long time,
But it all changed so fast,
You simply crossed the line.

I gave you my heart,
And you broke it bit by bit.
You grinded it into the dirt,
And simply spat on it.

And now all i have is mem'ries,
Of a love i thought to be true.
My only momento-a broken heart,
And it's all because of you.

*With help from Aish xx =] *

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Very well written .. You're very talented for so young . Thank you for your time as well :) , take care . 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Yours Truly xO

    Aww this was so cute. (=

  • 14 years ago

    by Faten

    NICELY DONE>>> 4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    A really good poem---the flow of your word are great and the rhyming was excellent

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Aww, this was a really great poem, it was quite sad, but i could feel the emotion you were trying to portray of a broken heart.I realy loved the rhyming and the flow of the poem was great.
    Great job
    5/5