Believing..

by Dreamofolwin   May 16, 2009


You's gave me hope..
You's gave me reason,
For getting out of bed,
When I had no believing.
In who I was,
And what I am.
My life was sort of,
Stuck in a jam.

I couldn't move..
I couldn't get out,
Suppose many days,
I was sitting with a pout,
The darker things,
Was all I could see,
The storm, the clouds,
The raging seas.

Forgetting that in all things..
God is still on the throne,
And that he will NEVER,
Leave us alone.
Until once again,
We open the door,
And let Him abide,
With us once more.

For we are His Beloved..
He gave His life for us,
He never will forget us,
The cost was just too much.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Thank you ALL so much for your most helpful comments :] They' ve opened my eyes! and helped very much... I've made a few changes here and there, and sbumitted my new write.. but now I think the last verse is too short! ... Help appreciated.
    LOL.
    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Olwin all in all a beautiful poem with a strong message, I don't mean to be critical but you might want check some of the spelling and grammar.
    It was an enjoyable read even so though, thank you

    Grant

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Dear Olwin, i really love poems with hope and you really showed that bright light coming from your words, loved it.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    It is so nice to see you writing. What a powerful message you have in this piece.
    Good job!
    Take Care
    (((hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Powerful words in this write. God never forgets us for he did pay a great price for us his children. If we believe these things, life will be good. Well done.

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