A bit of faith

by Aish   Jun 2, 2009


Wanting to drown,
wanting to cry,
wanting to leave,
wanting to die.

ive lost all hope,
my will to live,
ive lost all love,
my will to give.

But just before,
I take the leap-
something flickers,
way down deep.

A bit of faith-
I hold on tight.
A bit of faith-
Live through another night.

*for a short poem contest*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Well well well. Youve done it again. lol I like it, again, you manage to do a great job at expressing yourself. Short and simple, and yet, so powerful. I loved the ending stanza, wrapped it up well, but something about it didnt seem like it flowed well. Just the way im reading it, i duno, the last line just didnt flow perfect to me. I duno. But anyways, this is very worthy of another 5. Great work Aish. xx

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Hope you won, lol

    With this id expect you to come in first, second & third haha.

    Well done Aish, with anutha great masterpeice.

    *Hunny*

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