Night time...(Haiku)

by Dreamofolwin   Jul 28, 2009


Night time (Haiku)

Darkness all around
the air is so calm and still
as stars fill the sky

( This is a poem wrote a few months back and forgot to post! lol)
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Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).

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  • 14 years ago

    by heartless

    Haikus are so peaceful and clam. I think this is a great Haiku.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    "the air so calm and still"
    Ahhh yes, that is the beauty of the night. I
    could feel this..good write!

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I love haiku's, you have put the right words together to bring this one to full beauty
    Enjoyable

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Thanks Lacie and Sylvia... your comments are much appreciated :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A short form but you did it justice. Gives you a calm feeling when reading. Well done.

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