Summer (String Haiku)

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 22, 2009


Hazy sun up high
Warm breezes drift by my face
Tickling, pleasing me

Flowers start to bloom
Their scent enthralling to me
My senses they fill

Everywhere so bright
Vibrant and so full of life
Invigorates me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    This poem is a beautiful one about the summer. 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think flower should be flowers.

    Beautiful poem about Summer! Loved this. You did great. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    HaHa... Thankyou Christopher :) ... with a dash of lemon! HeHe.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice image good word flow. How do you want your iced tea?

  • 16 years ago

    by Starlight

    Very intriguing. The title caught my attention, I just had to read it. Very original.

    "Their scent enthralling to me
    My senses they fill"

    My favorite lines, oh.. how wonderful. You made this piece. Summer Is a wonderful season for flowers indeed. Especially there scent lol. Keep it up

    5/5

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