Pomeranians. [7/5 Trochee]

by Courageous Dreamer   Sep 4, 2009


Fearless pomeranians
bounce with excitement
twirling; performing their tricks
tasty inticement.

The champion is announced
standing ovation;
accepting her golden prize
with pure elation.

7/5 Trochee - -
Meter: 7/5/7/5
Rhyme Scheme: a/b/c/b

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  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I haven't seen this form before so this was a treat. Realistic, picture painting imagery. I could imagine myself at the dog show. Nice job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Thank you for posting this lovely and uplifting piece, it brought a smile onto my face. I love dogs and this type especially, thanks for capturing that joy they hold and the happiness they share. 5/5 from me, beautiful job as always.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Perfection

    Wow

    You are a true poet temps. Id give you a nicer comment but I dont rly know what to say about this more than it is very well written.

    I am happy to see you writing

    Never stop

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I know I read this and thought I had commented on it . Guess not. I liked how you made this a fun little poem. Funny how little dogs have so much heart.
    Very enjoyable

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A lovely sight of a winner with full of smiles.
    Well done with the form..good write :)

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