Dreams

An emotionally charged piece that brings a tear to the eyes.The depth and sadness behind the meaning in this piece tugs at the heartstrings my friend.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Great one... loved it, and loved the feeling I got while reading it. I see that you're still going strong... keep it up.

There are dreams we all travel
Some bring smiles and some fear
Been walking on a long road
With thoughts that are never clear

Ahh yes, we all walk that path without been
able to get a clear idea.

There are dreams we all travel
Some make us rise and some fall
Been riding this tide alone
Struggling while life takes its toll

I can feel the frustration within this verse & I
guess all share this same feeling.

Left alone within my mind
Searching for serenity
If only I could see the truth
What really lives inside me

They say peace comes from within. When
there is hope with it comes serenity. Truth is
there but at times we do not want to see it...

A touching write which brings back memories
for me...take care.

I absolutely loved the imagery in this poem. Loved the format and the way it was written. 5/5

An awesome poem.... with a depth of feeling that can be felt. Loved it. Very well put together... Brilliant job!