If I Told You...

by Dreamofolwin   Oct 19, 2009


If I told you that I love you,
Would you hold me for evermore?
If I looked into your eyes,
Telling you that I need no more...

To have fulfilled the longing,
That my vacant heart has sighed.
To sit alone and count,
The many silent tears I've cried.

Would you hold me this close always?
Always be at my side...
I want you now forever,
These feelings I can't hide.

So hold me today, tomorrow,
Everyday my whole life through.
Coz no one on earth can mean as much,
To my heart, as much as you.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    To have fulfilled the longing,
    That my vacant heart has sighed.
    To sit alone and count,
    The many silent tears I've cried.

    this was my favorite stanza and is such a nice emotion to share with us. Peace..

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful. You are w wonderful writer. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A sweet and sentimental write to give a loved
    one, very nice as well as sincere :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a very sweet poem, it flowed from the heart and felt like something real. Tender and sweet. Nicely done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Aah. How wonderful it is to love and to be loved, if it is the right person. This write is so fresh. You see, no matter how much we go through hell because of love, the heart is always inexperienced and we find ourselves missing love again.

    This write embodies just that. Forgiving and forgetting, to love and be loved once again. 5/5 Dear Olwin..Countess

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