Imaginary Now

by Lady Nik   Dec 18, 2009


The sound of wings
moving in the distance
wakes me from my
dreams of you. I try
so hard to hold on
to the shadows of your
face as my eyes allow
sunlight to erase your
presence. Come back to
me I wish you never
had to leave...

I fumble through
my thoughts hoping
to find a glimpse
of the past. If only
I could hear you
breathing next to me
now, maybe I'd
find the strength to stop
trying to join you. I can't
remember the last time
I saw you smile, it's
been such a long winter.

I wish I could make you real again...

You fell from heaven
so fast that you lost
your wings. Now I hear
the constant flapping
reminding me that you
have returned to
your cloud in the sky.

Why didn't you take
me with you? It's sears
little holes into my mentality
to know you're only
imaginary

now....

*I changed my ending :) *

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  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This one. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by KJ

    Hmm. I would have to say that out of all of your writes, this one was the most creative. I loved the ending. It sort of made my mind go to other places. Not sure how it ended before you edited it, but it is perfect. I must say that you are quite talented and gifted when it comes to placing WORDS in the right places. Great job with the format as well.
    5/5

    Kay Jay

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nik, This starts out very well but this ending is not up to your usual standards. Not sure what the other ending was but this one just doesn't seem put together.

  • 15 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    I love this. once again you worded this perfectly. the detailed description was so effective in creating amazing imagery. i actually think the ending is really good, it shows the utter pain that this person is going through. you are so talented. i love reading your poetry. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    Beautifully written Nik..XD Nice wordings too...Although i would have to say, it could have been ended much better...Just my opinion though..:-)

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