Close To You...

by Dreamofolwin   Jan 24, 2010


Close to you I want to be
yes, for all eternity...
Wrapped forever in your arms,
lost completely to your charms.

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Here I find such warmth and love,
and it takes me high above...
To a place I want to be,
where you and I share ecstasy.

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Yes I love you, yea and more,
you have opened my hearts door.
Made a flame burn inside me,
close to you I want to be...

~~~~~~~

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  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is so beautiful. Very pleasant to read that captures the heart and eyes with effortless grace. Well done, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Great job with his one! "you have opened my hearts door. Made a flame burn inside me..."
    :) would you please read/comment on mine? "the morning sun"

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    This was truly beautiful. i'm glad i came back to check and see if you wrote more poems :D

    i'm not sure if you know or care, but the last line in the 2nd stanza had 8 syllables where-as every other line had 7. but it was still amazing!
    ~Kuro

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    What a beautiful poem. What a wonderful place to be.

    Yes I love you, yea and more,
    you have opened my hearts door.
    Made a flame burn inside me,
    close to you I want to be...

    I really loved this stanza. What a wonderful feeling when someone lights that flame.
    Excellent job!
    Love
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by silverhuntress

    This is how I feel with my love! Such a simple, sweet yet poignant poem.

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