You Don't Even Care*

by lost in lovee   Feb 25, 2010


Broken, shattered
To no repair
This is the state you have left me in,
But you don't even care.

To you my feeling were just a joke;
My heart, just another game.
I'm not even me anymore
And you're the only one to blame.

You took everything away from me;
My happiness, my heart.
You don't even care
How badly you have torn me apart.

When we were together
At night I would sit in bed
Crying my eyes out,
Knowing I shouldn't believe a word you had just said.

You had an excuse for everything
But I made myself believe it was all true.
You don't even care
All the shit you have put me through.

Even when we broke up
You knew all the right things to say;
"Baby I love you, I want you back"
But if you really loved me you would have stayed.

You loved getting into my head
And you knew just the way to do it too.
You don't even care
That everything I'm saying is true.

You thought it was funny.
You bragged to your friends,
"Look she keeps coming back".
I just wanted to be dead.

And after everything I've been through,
I wish you just understood.
You probably still don't even care,
But if you read this through again maybe you'll realize that you should.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Cale

    I loved this poem for a few reasons. The style that you used i also use and i love it. And also the flow and works were great and made it very heartfelt. great poem! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This was a really good poem, the rhyming worked quite well but I think some of the lines should be made smaller in order to allow the flow to be more consistant =] Great job though this is a nicley written piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I really loved this. it's so heartbreaking and life just plain sucks. great job with this one :) please read my new one? "unrecognizable"

  • 10 years ago

    by Su

    :(

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Guys definately can be jerks but a lot of the times its the girls fault because you know he's that way but you go after him anyways. I think with your poems you should try and keep your lines all around the same length. Try to add or subtract a few words on certain lines to help with flow. sometimes try and use words that means the same as another just smaller and sounding better. It will help challenge you and you'll become a better writer :) nice job 5/5