by Jad Mar 30, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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One, |
by Meena Krish
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You are doing really well with writing form poetry and this too is very well written..good |
by Dreamofolwin
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WONDERFUL. I love this form and your poem. You have done a good job... Well done Austin :) |
by Cindy
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Austin |
by Sylvia
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Austin, nice work with the form and it once again proves that a few words can be used to convey a powerful message. Well done. |
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Aah very nice, the ending just sums it up all too well. Very nice Jad.. keep it up. |